We have to write our life stories for english. I want to know if I’m writing about the right stuff, not grammer. I will edit the grammer once I figure out if I’m writing about the right stuff.

I was born at ********* ****** ******* on May 26. 1995. I lived with my mom, dad, big sister, and big brother. My brother and sister were both 10 the year I was born. My mom stayed at home to take care of me, and my dad was a lawyer.
I met my first friend, Katie, when I was 2. She was 9 when I met her. We would have a lot of fun making up games and stuff. I met my second friend, Ashly, when I was 3. My grandma babysat for her. We used to have tea parties and play with our doll babies.
When I was 3 I attended my first dance class. I did ballet and tap and I loved it. I also started pre school at ** ******. That is where I met two of my best friends, Katelyn and Carolina. My brother also went to military school at ** ***** when I was 3. My life as a toddler was very simple. I would wake up, go to school, come home and play. I played by myself a lot because of the age differance between my sister and me.
I started kindergarten at ******** Elementry when I was 5. I had Ms. ******. My best friends were Katie, Katelyn, and Carolina. I was a good student, I didn’t get in trouble a lot. I continued to take dance. I also started playing the piano when I was 5. My first grade year didn’t bring much change.
In 2nd grade I made a new best friend, Sidney. I also had an excellent teacher, Mrs. ******. I was a good student, making mostly A’s. 2nd grade was when I joined the competitive dance team at my studio. I really loved competing.
I had Mrs. ****** again on 3rd grade. My life pretty much stayed the same. My sister went to college, and my grandma moved accross the state though. This is when I began taking Hebrew school lessons to prepare for my Bat Mitzvah. I didn’t really grasp the concept of being Jewish until 3rd grade.
In 4th grade I got to move up to the “big kid hall”. We began changing teachers to get ready for middle school. Sidney and I were still best friends. I continued my dancing and still played the piano.
5th grade didn’t bring much change. I had the same teachers, friends, and did the same activities. I got in trouble for the first time in 5th grade. I forged my fathers signature on a paper I forgot to get signed. I learned my lesson by serving after school detention. That was the worst thing I had ever done, and didn’t plan to do it again.
6th grade, I finally made it to ****** middle school, home of the Falcons. I got seperated from Sidney, not having any classes with her. I made two new best friends, Hollie and Kayla. They were also in my dance class. I really loved middle school. I made straight A’s and liked all my teachers. I also started playing volleyball in 6th grade. I played on the rec league team, the Strikerz. I came up with the team name myself. During my 6th grade year, my sister moved to Germany. I took this really hard, I missed her so much.
7th grade would have to be my favorite year. I made a new friend, Emily. Her locker was below mine. I had my favorite teacher, Mrs. ******. She helped me discover my love of reading. I played volleyball again in 7th grade, for the Crushers this time. I still danced, and this year I got to help teach the little kids. It was really fun. I had my Bat Mitzvah at the end of 7th grade. It was a great experiance. I also joined my temple youth group and became a part of NFTY ***.
Now I have entered my 8th grade year. My teachers are okay, I liked them better last year though. I’m taking 3 high school credit classes, and have made all A’s so far. I was recently enducted into the honors society. I am really active at my temple this year. We are planning on going to NYC in the spring. I am really loving dance. This year is my first year in pointe, and I love my new teacher, Ms. *****. I’m also teaching the little girls again. I didn’t do volleyball this year. My brother is currently deployed in Iraq. I miss him a lot. I finally got a cell phone, that I obsessively text on. I have a boyfriend, Gage, I like him a lot. I have a lot of friends this year, more than I’ve ever had. I really like my life right now, but I am always open for change.

SORRY THIS IS SO LONG! What I’m asking for is
-opinions
-did I write about the right stuff’
-should I take anything out’ add anything’

THANK YOU!